You have done some prior work on some of these already. Go back and review the work you've done to help you.
Journal Prompts:
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holes_journal_friendship.docx |
holes_journal_resilient.docx |
For the April break, you will make three detailed blog responses to 'Holes'. Remember to make a draft in your journal book first. Edit carefully, paying attention to grammar and spelling; improve your sentences by crafting descriptive compound and complex sentences and ask yourself if you have fully answered the questions. Then, after you've revised as best you could, type it into your blog carefully. You have done some prior work on some of these already. Go back and review the work you've done to help you. Journal Prompts:
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Anna
4/2/2012 04:56:44 pm
Miss Lo there is something wrong with the first sentence holes_journal_friendship. 'Stanley never had a friend before arriving at Camp Green Lake but made a good friend in Zero. ' it sounds like Stanley made a good friend in a place called Zero, should it be'Stanley never had a friend before arriving at Camp Green Lake but he made a good friend there, Zero. ' I think that sounds a bit better.
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Manlin
4/6/2012 01:45:08 pm
WOW! Anna, you are REALLY good at editing! :3
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Edward
4/7/2012 04:41:37 pm
Miss Lo, can I write it on my reading response book?
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Edward
4/8/2012 10:12:24 am
YAY! I found my Journal book! ¬.¬
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Hannah
4/9/2012 03:09:26 pm
Anna is sure good at editing Ms.Lo's mistakes, you should be more careful of sentance fluency Ms.Lo!!!
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